The Writing Center
Mailing Address
Cleveland State University
2121 Euclid Avenue
RT Library 124
Cleveland, OH 44115-2214
Campus Location
1860 E. 22 Street, Rhodes Tower 124
Office Hours
Monday-Thursday 9:30AM-5:00PM
Friday 9:30AM-4:00PM
Saturday 10:00AM-2:30PM (Only Email Paper Review)
Sunday 2:00PM-7:00PM (Only Email Paper Review)
For appointments call:
Dr. Mary McDonald
216-687-6981
Phone: 216-687-6982
Fax: 216-687-6943
How Professors Grade a Research Paper
This sheet is designed for grading research papers. Scores range from 1 (low) to 5 (high).
Higher Order Concerns
What's working: tell the writer the best features of his or her text here
Focus 1 2 3 4 5
A focus is the thesis or main point of your writing. Is it clear? Is the whole paper on the focus? Write out the focus right here.
Development
Development refers to the support you give your focus.
Comprehensiveness 1 2 3 4 5
Are there enough quotes, paraphrases, examples, inferences, reasoning, opinions, forecasts? Has the writer given a reasonable number of
sources to be comprehensive on this subject for this assignment?
Background Information 1 2 3 4 5
Has the writer from the beginning of the paper introduced the research
cited appropriately (i.e. full name, year of book/article, general goals
of research, context for research)? Do any definitions or histories
need to be given before the body of the paper begins?
Integration of Sources 1 2 3 4 5
How well has the writer paraphrased and quoted so that the voice of the
writer, not the sources, guides the text? Is the in-text citation done well?
Audience Adaptation 1 2 3 4 5
Is the text written for a college-level audience with appropriate vocabulary
and length of explanations? Are appropriate materials explained well?
Some potential problems occur when writers write seemingly for
themselves without addressing an audience (and the text can be too
personal or informal), or sometimes writers address only experts, making the text too dense and short.
Argument 1 2 3 4 5
If the writer presents an argument, is it a full one? Does it lack any
information? Does the argument follow through to a conclusion? Does it
include a rebuttal? Is the rebuttal a fair one? Has the writer
respectfully treated the views of all sides?
Organization 1 2 3 4 5
Has the writer organized or structured the paper in the way that the discipline suggests? That is, if it is a lab report, does it adhere to the proper structure? If an argumentative essay, is it organized to present an argument? Can the reader follow individual paragraphs-are they well organized?
Does the writer use meta-discourse (language about language) to direct the reader through the text?
Lower Order Concerns
Style 1 2 3 4 5
Style can be considered in terms of sentence patterns and diction. Are the sentence patterns varied or all the same? Variety produces more interesting reading. Is the diction appropriate for a college-level assignment? Is the diction appropriate for the discipline? Has the writer included too many informal elements (e.g. cliché, contractions, the use of you or I, informal diction)?
Mechanics 1 2 3 4 5
Mechanics refer to punctuation, spelling and grammar. Could the writer benefit from a brush up on some grammatical points? Could the writer learn new punctuation strategies?
Mailing Address
Cleveland State University
2121 Euclid Avenue
RT Library 124
Cleveland, OH 44115-2214
Campus Location
1860 E. 22 Street, Rhodes Tower 124
Office Hours
Monday-Thursday 9:30AM-5:00PM
Friday 9:30AM-4:00PM
Saturday 10:00AM-2:30PM (Only Email Paper Review)
Sunday 2:00PM-7:00PM (Only Email Paper Review)
For appointments call:
Dr. Mary McDonald
216-687-6981
Phone: 216-687-6982
Fax: 216-687-6943